The first
hurdle of any new writer (other than writing the book, of course) is getting a
manuscript onto a real person’s desk instead of onto the slush pile (the slush
pile is the vast heap of unsolicited manuscripts which turn up at all
publishers’ offices and which rarely get read), and my advice has always been
to find an agent - how do you find an agent?
Go to your local library and consult The
Writer’s and Artist’s Yearbook (or its equivalent in the US). Or subscribe to Publisher’s Weekly or The
Bookseller and read the trade columns - or write to an author you like and
ask for a recommendation. But do make
sure you pick the right agent. There’s
no point in sending fiction to an agent who only deals in non-fiction. I also object to agents who charge a reading
fee. I know that many agents hate
reading the vast number of manuscripts that come their way, but it’s their job,
damn it, and making the writer pay them to do it is cheap.
You
can, of course, approach a publisher directly.
No reputable publisher will cheat you, but you will not get as good a
deal as you would with an agent’s help.
Publishing contracts are complicated, and if you don’t understand the
minutiae of foreign rights, discounted books, blah blah blah, then you will be
negotiating from a position of weakness.
Agents do understand these things, and agents also know which editors
are looking out for particular books and, better still, they often have more
time to nurture a new writer than a publisher might have.
If
you’ve written a good book you’ll have little trouble finding an agent, but
what is a good book? The Historical
Novel Society recently polled every publisher about what they were looking for
in a manuscript and received all sorts of unhelpful replies - ‘page turners,’
or ‘best-sellers’, or ‘originality’, which is fine, but what are those
things? For a first novelist, sitting
at home and writing into the terrible void, it is an acute question, and I had
better say right away that I do not think I can provide the answer, but hope at
least to put down some markers. The
cop-out response is to offer the American judge’s definition of pornography; we
may not be able to define it, but we know it when we see it, but that is simply
not true of manuscripts. Think how many
publishers turned down Day of the Jackal? Or, more recently, Dava Sobel’s Longitude? Or, most famously, the vast number who rejected Harry
Potter! We might produce the most
sparkling, page-turning, original manuscript, and it can still get turned down
(luckily for some of us the opposite is also true).
But there are some clues in the
responses of the publishers to the Historical Novel Society’s questions. ‘An original voice’, one said, while another
asked for ‘drive’, which I suppose means enthusiasm, and if you are not
enthusiastic about your book then it will show. Writing is not supposed to be a labour, but a joy. I do not speak here of literature, about
which I know nothing, but the business of writing readable stories, and to the
best of my knowledge no-one is forced into doing that. We do it because we think it is better than
working, and because it is enjoyable, and though the production of a first (and
second, or twentieth) manuscript can be a very hard labour, it must not show in
the finished product. Writing is fun,
honest!
Which means you have to get past the
horrid stage of not enjoying it, and that is usually caused by a lack of
confidence. Is the stuff we’re
producing up to snuff? Is the style all
right? Style seems to be a stumbling
block for many first novelists, and the only advice I can offer is to tell you
how I overcame it. Which is not to
claim that I have a fine style, only that I no longer worry about it. But when I was writing Sharpe’s Eagle I spent hours reading and re-reading the typescript,
and every time I got hopelessly depressed thinking that it was no bloody good
because the style was so clumsy, and so finally I tried an experiment. I typed out three pages of a Hornblower novel,
substituting Sharpe’s name for Hornblower’s, and then I put the pages into a
drawer. After three days I read those
three pages (which looked exactly like my own typescript) and, to my relief,
discovered that I was just as critical of Forester’s style as I was of my
own. But he was published. More, he was successful, so clearly I was
being too critical. The experience
freed me of that worry. Try it
yourself. Reproduce three pages of a
Sharpe novel on your own typewriter or word-processor, then come back to it and
see just what rubbish can get published!
Later on, when I had written two or
three books, I learned that style is something that can be applied at the later
stages of writing. The most important
thing, the all-important thing, is to get the story right. Write, rewrite, rewrite again, and do not
worry about anything except story. It
is story, story, story. That is your
business. Your job is not to educate
readers on the finer points of Elizabethan diplomacy or Napoleonic warfare or
villainous terrorist plots, your job is to divert and amuse people who have had
a hard day at work. What will get you
published? Not style, not research, but
story. Once the story is right,
everything else will follow. Rewriting
is falling off a log, the hard work is getting the story. I once wrote a 12,000 word story for the Daily Mail’s Christmas editions. It took eight days to get the story right
and three hours to rewrite the whole thing, and that rewrite included a brand
new villain. But once the story was
right the piece could take all sorts of pummelling because the story was strong
enough.
Kurt Vonnegut once gave a splendid
piece of advice. Every good story, he
said, begins with a question. Harry
meets Anne and wants to marry her.
There’s the question already, will he succeed? But Harry is already married to Katharine, so there is your
plot. Simple, isn’t it? And if your opening question is right, then
the pursuit of the answer will propel the reader through the book. More important, it will propel the writer
through the book. I know there are
differences of opinion here, but I can only speak for myself and I rarely know
how a book I’m writing will end when I begin it, and even when I think I know,
I usually turn out to be wrong. How can
you know? Every story is new, and if it
is untold, how do you know the ending?
You write to discover what will happen, and it is the excitement of that
discovery that should give a manuscript its enthusiasm.
And once you have your story, you must
keep it moving. If I could have my life
over again I would rewrite the first third of The Winter King to compress the story, because when I wrote it I
was too busy creating a world when I should have been keeping the characters
busy. But how do you know when you’re
losing pace? How do you know if one
scene is too long, or whether a discursive explanation is appropriate in a
particular chapter? In time it does
become instinctive, and so it should, but a first novelist may well not have
those instincts. In which case there is
only one thing to do, something which I know a lot of professional writers did
when they began, and something which rarely seems to be recommended.
Suppose
you decide to build a better mousetrap.
You would begin, surely, by taking apart the existing mousetraps to see
how they worked. You must do the same
with books. When I wrote Sharpe’s Eagle, never having written a
book before, I began by disassembling three other books. Two were Hornblowers, and I forget which the
third was, but I had enjoyed them all.
So I read them again, but this time I made enormous coloured charts
which showed what was happening paragraph by paragraph through the three books. How much was action? And where was the action in the overall plan
of the book? How much dialogue? How much romance? How much flashback (I hate
flashback)? How much background
information? Where did the writer place
it? I already knew what I liked in the
books, and I was determined to provide more of that in my book, and I knew what
I disliked, and wanted to use less of that, but the three big charts (sadly
I’ve lost them) were my blueprints. It
was not plagiarism, but it was imitation.
I learned to start with a fairly frenetic scene, and to keep that pace going
before I slowed it down to provide necessary information. I learned, if you like, the structure of a
best-seller, and then I imposed that structure on what I was writing. These days I do not think about it any more
(I should have done with The Winter King),
but in the first three or four years those analyses were priceless.
Your book must have an original
voice. But it will, won’t it? Because there’s only one of you, but unless
you are in the posterity stakes of high-class literature, you will be producing
a book that is within a recognisable genre, and you will hugely improve your
chances of success if you take the time to study successful works in the same
genre. Why not learn from successful
authors? Disassemble their books, then
set out to do better. If you worry that
the long scene in your chapter four is much too long, then see how other
writers tackled similar scenes in a comparable stage of their book. The answers
to a lot of first novelists’ questions are already on their bookshelves, but
you have to dig them out.
Research, how much is
needed? The answer is annoyingly
contradictory - both more than you can ever do and only as much as is
needed. By that I mean that you can
never know enough about your chosen period, and so your whole life becomes a
research project into the 16th or 18th or whatever
century it is you are writing about, but when it comes to a specific book there
really can be too much research. Why
explore eighteenth century furniture making if the book doesn’t feature
furniture? Do as much research as you
feel comfortable doing, write the book and see where the gaps are, then go and
research the gaps. But don’t get hung
up on research - some folk do nothing but research and never get round to
writing the book.
Nothing, I suppose, can guarantee
success. It seems to me that there is a
great deal of luck in the whole process.
I was lucky in meeting my agent (his first words to me were ‘it must be
a f****** awful book’), and I was lucky in finding a publisher who understood
that runaway best-sellers are rarely first novels (some are), but that if she
coaxed and nagged and edited me through the first four or five then the series
might be a success, and I was lucky in having a wife who was prepared to keep the
wolf from the door while I wrote those first books. I am also hugely lucky, twenty -odd years later, in having the
same agent, publisher and wife. So luck
is important, and the publishing business is capricious, and the world is
unfair, but if you understand that your job is not to be an historian, but to
be a storyteller, and if you take the trouble to find out how stories are told,
you can hugely improve your luck.
In
the end you have to write the book. Do
it, remember that everyone began just like you, sitting at a table and secretly
doubting that they would ever finish the task.
But keep at it. A page a day and
you’ve written a book in a year! And
enjoy it! Writing, as many of us have
discovered, is much better than working.