Hello Mr. Cornwell,

my name is Benton Walters and I’d like to, if I may, ask your help. You see I am currently writing a historical fiction story and while I’m following some of your very helpful advice (provided to me from a packet of your words for new writers printed by a friend for me) I keep feeling that I don’t have enough commentary for my story and that it’s a bit too dialogue oriented and I was hoping that you could help me in figuring out a way to add commentary while still be true to the story. I understand if this is a bit much to ask but any help would greatly be appreciated. Thank you for your time and for created such wonderful books.