I bought your book Sword of Kings in hard bound volume. First time I had bought a hard bound volume book in a long time but I had read most of what you have written and thought it worth buying.

At page 76 the hero and his men are indicated as being in a pasture, hiding- “We had left the road to hide behind blackthorn hedge of the rain-soaked pasture.”

At page 81 they were still there “The came from the east, circling below the pasture where we were couched beside the blackthorn hedge.” and “The horses turned toward us, their big hooves churning the wet turn to muddy ruin.”

However, at page 78 appears “We had been sitting on a bench beside the tavern’s hearth. All around us men snored. The wind still rattled the shutters and fretted at the reed thatch and rain still fell through the roof-hole to hiss in the fire…”

I this a matter of concern? Should it be corrected before a new edition or an edition in paperback?

Otherwise, good book.

Henry W. Bockman