*AZINCOURT SPOILER ALERT* On page 211 of Azincourt, you have Nick Hook hearing the words of Crispinian & Crispin commanding Hook to murder Robert Perrill. How can you justify two martyred saints demanding a murder? Murder is vilified in the the Ten Commandments, so how could voices from heaven demand a breaking of those rules? Personally, (though I’m no storyteller like yourself) this action creates a crater or a speed bump in your story of Hook, and would be better served if Hook released Robert P. and the Perrill brothers became grudging allies of Hook, thus not intruding on the spiritual cannon of Christian thought, it would also ingratiate former enemies into the narrative. I’m only on page 213, so what do I know of the story, though that’s the first stumbling block in your book that has interrupted its poetic genius. I can live with that. =) Josh R.